The Darren Bent missing poster (for the Orient game)

TheOne2Smooth · Post by **TheOne2Smooth** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:03 pm

i will be posting these bad boys all around Leyton Orient when the scum come to play them!! what do you guys reckon?

stearmaster · Post by **stearmaster** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:08 pm

TheOne2Smooth wrote:i will be posting these bad boys all around Leyton Orient when the scum come to play them!! what do you guys reckon?

quality!!!!!

TheOne2Smooth · Post by **TheOne2Smooth** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:10 pm

Its not the finished article but if people are willing to add to it? or even check my grammar just in case

NBM · Post by **NBM** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:19 pm

TheOne2Smooth wrote:Its not the finished article but if people are willing to add to it? or even check my grammar just in case

Joined instead of joint?

Post by **I Hate Hleb** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:21 pm

Some spelling mistakes on it Smoothy.

It should be joined not joint (not often you'll see me write that sentence!!

);

'Their' not 'there';

'Too' not 'to'.

Also, you could use the word 'or' before 'the 16 million pound bench-warmer!;

Commas after 'but' and 'Tottenham';

'He' instead of 'they' lost all sense of 'their' powers and skill;

'Whereabouts' is one word;

Also missing: Spurs' Glory Days.

Maybe you could add: 61' and Never Again!! at the bottom of the poster?

TheOne2Smooth · Post by **TheOne2Smooth** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:21 pm

thanks I'm actually thinking of just doing missing glory days at Spurs?
or shall I stay with the Bent idea?

Post by **I Hate Hleb** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:23 pm

Feck me Smoothy!!

After all that work I put in, as well!!

TheOne2Smooth · Post by **TheOne2Smooth** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:30 pm

I Hate Hleb wrote:Feck me Smoothy!! After all that work I put in, as well!!

I've added at the bottom 1961 never again 71/02 GOONERS copyright of TheOne2Smooth onlinegooner at the bottom

Post by **I Hate Hleb** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:32 pm

Don't put 'online gooner' on it, otherwise our site will be invaded by their neanderthal fans!!

TheOne2Smooth · Post by **TheOne2Smooth** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:35 pm

d'oh it just have sopyright TheOne2Smooth now

Post by **SPUDMASHER** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:36 pm

Brilliant piece of work smoothie. I'd love to see their faces when they see it

goonarmy · Post by **goonarmy** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:37 pm

I Hate Hleb wrote:Don't put 'online gooner' on it, otherwise our site will be invaded by their neanderthal fans!!

Don't worry a recent survey confirms that 9/10 **** are still unable to operate a PC, so we should be alright

TheOne2Smooth · Post by **TheOne2Smooth** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:40 pm

UPDATED VERSION

By the way the real image is much clearer as I done it on word I had to copy and paste on to paint to show you the poster

Post by **I Hate Hleb** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:49 pm

TheOne2Smooth wrote:d'oh it just have sopyright TheOne2Smooth now

Was that a freudian slip, Smoothy?

TheOne2Smooth · Post by **TheOne2Smooth** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:49 pm

I Hate Hleb wrote:
TheOne2Smooth wrote:d'oh it just have sopyright TheOne2Smooth now
Was that a freudian slip, Smoothy?

my typing is so shit lol

The Darren Bent missing poster (for the Orient game)

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